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Chapter 8 - The Paper Web

I sat cross-legged on the floor, the papers spreading out around me like toxic waste.

I pulled out my laptop, my fingers flying across the keys with frantic, mechanical speed. I logged into my credit monitoring portal—something I hadn't checked in six months because I didn't carry balances and had an eighty-point buffer above seven hundred.

The screen refreshed.

My score wasn't 780.

It was 512.

*Delinquencies: 4.*

*New Inquiries: 9.*

*Total Revolving Debt: $86,400.*

Ryan hadn't just opened one card in my name; he had opened three. The addresses on the older accounts were listed under my parents' suburban address—the house where I hadn't lived in twelve years, the house where Evelyn Vance handled all the mail.

I opened the leather-bound ledger that had tumbled from Brooke’s bag. It was filled with Brooke’s elegant, loopy handwriting.

*Dec 1: Ryan’s loan due - $4,200. Paid via Claire’s Citi.*

*Dec 8: Mom’s equity draw - $15,000. Transfer to primary checking.*

*Dec 15: Cruise package balance - $3,800. Paid via Claire’s Chase.*

*Note: If Claire checks Experian before Jan 15, tell Mom to say it's an old medical bill error.*

They knew.

Brooke knew. Ryan knew. And my mother—my mother wasn't just an enabler who loved her son too much; she was the gatekeeper who intercepted the collection notices from their mailbox.

The cruise wasn't a family vacation. It was a getaway. Ryan and Brooke were floating on a mountain of forged signatures, maxed-out identity theft, and borrowed time. They had dumped the children on me not just because they wanted a break, but because the walls were closing in, the notices were arriving daily, and they needed seven days in international waters to let the checks clear or move money between accounts.

I closed the ledger.

I didn't cry. The time for crying had ended when the deadbolt clicked shut that morning.

I reached for my phone and dialed a number I knew by heart: Nathan Reid. Nathan was the senior legal counsel for the construction firm where I ran payroll. He wasn't just an attorney; he was an ex-prosecutor from the county financial crimes unit who had left public service three years ago because he was tired of corporate executives walking away with slaps on the wrist.

"Claire?" Nathan’s voice was warm, carrying the background noise of his sister’s family talking over a holiday dinner. "Merry Christmas. Is everything okay? You never call on holidays."

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"Nathan," I said, my voice eerily calm. "I need you to tell me what constitutes first-degree felony identity fraud in the state of Ohio."

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